The Time Paradox

Ok, a short one for Sunday. It's no a creepypasta, but still, is quite interesting.
Get ready for the headache.

The Time Paradox

 

A baby girl is mysteriously dropped off at an orphanage in Cleveland in 1945. 

"Jane" grows up lonely and dejected, not knowing who her parents are, until one day in 1963 she is strangely attracted to a drifter. She falls in love with him, but just when things are looking up for Jane a series of disasters strikes: First, she becomes pregnant by the drifter, who then disappears. Second, during the complicated delivery doctors discover that Jane has both sets of sex organs, and to save her life, they most surgically convert “her” to a “him." Finally, a mysterious stranger kidnaps her baby from the delivery room.

Reeling from these disasters, rejected from society, scorned by fate, “he” becomes a drunkard and a drifter. Not only has Jane lost her parents and her lover, but he has lost his only child as well. Years later, in 1970, he stumbles into a lonely bar, called Pop's Place, and spills out his pathetic story to an elderly bartender. The sympathetic bartender offers me drifter the chance to avenge the stranger who left her pregnant and abandoned, on the condition that he join the “time traveller corps." Both of them enter a time machine and the bartender drops the drifter off in 1963. The drifter is strangely attracted to a young orphan girl, who subsequently becomes pregnant.

The bartender then goes forward 9 months, kidnaps the baby girl from the hospital, and drops the baby off in an orphanage back in 1945. Then the bartender drops off the thoroughly confused drifter in 1985, to enlist in the time traveller corps. The drifter eventually gets his life together and becomes respected and elderly member of the time traveller corps, and then disguises himself as a bartender and has his most difficult mission: a date with destiny, meeting a certain drifter at Pop's Place in 1970.

28 comments:

  1. Cpt.Leon said...

    Thats cool, wasnt gonna sleep tonight anyway! +1 follower (since i sleep to much)

  2. Really nice clock! I really like this one.

  3. Dave said...

    Great story, thanks

  4. noyou said...

    i like the note, btw you should see "into the universe with stephen hawking - time travel" is amazing

  5. Lou_BRK said...

    Thanks, I'll look for it

  6. bruno said...

    headache ._.

  7. By Herbie said...

    Oh dear... amazingly trippy.

  8. damn , just got my mind blown. that is definitely a post i shouldn't have read early in the morning. haha

  9. Liquider said...

    woa freaky!

  10. Mike said...

    My mind is well and truly blown.

  11. Xiism said...

    Cool, thanks for sharing this interesting read!

  12. cheshire said...

    Stared at that clock for like 30 seconds... great story, as well.

  13. choikesta said...

    great post

  14. Dave Benzene said...

    i hope my life doesnt end up like this

  15. Chriz said...

    Gotta get down on friday!

  16. Admin said...

    This is a really good post. Thanks.

  17. Fortune said...

    Because you can outrun the devil, if you try, but you'll never out run the hands of time... in the Twilight Zone.

  18. Lunarchy said...

    Niiice, very creepy! +follow

  19. polyesterr said...

    crazy

  20. Mindy said...

    WOW! that is creepy, mind blowing & awesome! definitely following ; )

  21. mindlessfrk said...

    That's why you don't mess with time travel xD

  22. Creepy clock xD

  23. Mike said...

    Yikes man... Great read...

    Thanks for posting! Tough to sleep tonight hahaha

  24. loved it

  25. Lucky13 said...

    Oh wow, so every person in that story is the same individual. The time-traveler, the orphan girl, the drifter and the bartender. love these kind of mind-bending stories!

  26. pho said...

    great post, i have a head-ache now is that bad...
    very interesting

  27. Jesse Crows said...

    very good read once again thanks

  28. I feel like I just got incepted. Interesting story thanks

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